My Hobby

注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(3)题目已为你写好。
参考词汇:hobby爱好,reading阅读,knowledge知识
要求:
语句通顺,语法正确,条理清晰,表达完整。

📖读题

引出爱好

✍️写句子

每个人都有自己的爱好,我的爱好是读书。

📖读题

描述读书的时间和好处

✍️写句子

我每天晚上都读故事书。书籍带给我快乐和新知识。通过阅读我可以更多地了解世界。它让我聪明而安静。

📖读题

表达决心

✍️写句子

读书是一个好爱好。我会坚持每天读书。

每个人都有自己的爱好,我的爱好是读书。我每天晚上都读故事书。书籍带给我快乐和新知识。通过阅读我可以更多地了解世界。它让我聪明而安静。读书是一个好爱好。我会坚持每天读书。

📌word choice

hobbies, mine, reading books

🧩sentence construction

Everyone has hobbies, and mine is reading books.

📌word choice

read storybooks, every evening, bring happiness and knowledge, know about the world, makes me smart

🧩sentence construction

I read storybooks every evening. Books bring me happiness and knowledge. I can know about the world from reading. It makes me smart.

📌word choice

good hobby, keep reading

🧩sentence construction

Reading is a good hobby. I will keep reading.

Everyone has hobbies, and mine is reading books.

I read storybooks every evening. Books bring me happiness and knowledge. I can know about the world from reading. It makes me smart.

Reading is a good hobby. I will keep reading.

基础分:Everyone has hobbies, and mine is reading books.
I read storybooks every evening. Books bring me happiness and knowledge. I can know about the world from reading. It makes me smart. Reading is a good hobby. I will keep reading.

良好分:Everyone has hobbies, and mine is reading books.
I read storybooks every evening. Books bring me happiness and new knowledge. I can know more about the world from reading. It makes me smart and quiet.
Reading is a good hobby. I will keep reading every day.

优秀分:Everyone has hobbies, and mine is reading books.
I read storybooks every evening. Books bring me happiness and new knowledge. I can know more about the world from reading. It makes me smart and quiet.
Reading is a good hobby. I will keep reading every day.

太棒了!